Ava's Writing Samples - Middle of First Grade Year

 One Sunny day.  Gianna, Makenzie, Ariana, and I were having a campout in the dark woods.  We had snaks (snacks).  Gianna ate cookies.  makenzie at presls (pretzels).  Ariana ate strobars (strawberries).  I ate moshmelose (marshmallows).  There were games there too.  We played sorry, memory and candy Land.  We had supr (supper) there.  There was spgedy (spaghetti), chickinnoodlesup (chicken noodle soup) and macurony (macaroni) and cheese.  There were beds.  There was one for Gianna, Mackenzie, Ariana, and I.  There were too (two) pepple (people) next door to us.  They were lowed (loud).  They were just having a party.  We comed (calmed) down.   But it was still lowed.(loud)  We could not sleep.  Finaly (finally) we could sleep because all too peppl (people) left.  Then it beecam (became) night time.  We had a fiyr (fire) and we rosdid (roasted) marshmallows and we sang sogs (songs).  We played hied (hide) and seeck (seek) in the woods.  It was time for our bed time.
The Next morning we ate to thing for brefticx (breakfast).  We bakte (baked) it over the fiyr (fire).  It was the best brecfest (breakfast) ever.  Next we play ball and hide and go seeck (seek).  Those were your fafrit (favorite) games.  We are the best grls (girls) evre (ever).  Finally it was supr (supper) time.  We ate spgedy (spaghetti) and warm cookies.  It was the best super (supper) evre (ever).  Then we went outside to play games.  It was the same gams (games) as eler (earlier).  Then it was lunch time.  We ate budrnoodles (butter noodles) and checcunuges (chicken nuggets).  It was the best lunch evre (ever).  I love camping trips. 
Tomorrow we go home we are sad.  We had to pak (pack) our stuff up.  Hry (hurry) I said, We haf (have) to cach (catch) the bus.  Yay, lets hry (hurry) said Gianna.  Yaye (yeah) we cached (catched)  the bus.  I am so ecsidid (excited) we cached (catched) the bus.  We finally got home.  We talld (told) mom evrething (everything) we did.